Spring Birds — Writer’s Treasure Chest

Waking up to the blackbird’s song a lovely sound it’s all along. the lark it twitters right at dawn by the edge of wood you see a fawn. ** The breeze, it touches twig and bloom the bees, they hum and search their room to collect the nectar for their brood spring is here […]

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Enjoy expression, don’t be a dry writer — Poetic Cultivation

I am just sharing some personal experience as a writer, some “brotherly” advice, if you will. Believe it or not I read through a lot of what folks are posting and sharing, and there is a lot of great talent out there. However, in my opinion, for some it falls a bit flat. Writing itself […]

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Do you know how important hooks are? — Don Massenzio’s Blog

Originally posted on jean’s writing: Extremely. Without hooks, the reader stops reading. Today’s letter in the A-Z Challenge is H. H= Hooks Hooks are needed throughout the story, not just in the beginning. Everyone knows about the Opening Hook. That first paragraph that grabs or catches the reader’s attention. Or not. This is your chance to…

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That or Which? Grammar girl — Don Massenzio’s Blog

Originally posted on Kawanee’s Korner: ? Restrictive Clause—That A restrictive clause is just part of a sentence that you can’t get rid of because it specifically restricts some other part of the sentence. Here’s an example: Gems that sparkle often elicit forgiveness. The words that sparkle restrict the kind of gems you’re talking about.…

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